The will-eth be excerpts of my writing here. Really! As soon as I write something I'm half-satisfied with.
Ok, so for now, here is one. But any commenteths would help. I'm trying to wriggle fantasy/magyck into this story:
well, here it is, but its' just an idea, so i know the writing is awful,:
" I'm the one in the family who is used, and abused, only I can tell the cops, 'cause its not physical abuse. The kids at school don't know either, to them, I'm the "weird kid," the "odd one out" i have been since Year 2. When mamma died…and my awful step-father took over my life, my step-sister is OK though, but that is because she is still in Pre-K and adorable…spoilt… and innocent. I, on the other hand am a drudge. (Thats the fancy word or it, i saw it in the dictionary)
I'm in year 8 now, and used to the work I am made to do. I think my step father hates me so much because I'm not pretty. I'm short, dark and I have wiry black hair that practically stands up on end so i look like I'm plugged into a socket. I don't think he likes my name either, its' Pria. Come to think of it, i don't like it much either.
He named my step-sister, (mamma died giving birth to her) Skye. I think that name is so pretty, i call her my morning sky. Well, I call her that when Evin isn't there anyway. (Evin is my stepfathers' name, I call him that, I'll never call him Dadda like my loving, poor deceased father.)"
And yea, its' not edited yet.
